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    Post by Daemon Spade 28th December 2012, 6:54 pm

    Primary Magic: Lunar
    Secondary Magic:  None
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Lunar magic was once a very common form of magic so common in fact that a small country was formed by the lunar mages. The lunar mages were a peaceful tribe who lived in harmony with nature  their most prominent allies were the wolves  that lived in the surrounding area even some of the more well known rune knights would have a hard time facing a lunar warrior. TO use lunar magic the user channels energy from the moon and uses their body as a medium then bend the energy into a physical form or as a catalyst for  their hand to hand combat techniques. While in the past lunar magic was common now there is only one user born a year and out of twelve born  only one is lucky to live to adulthood. The main reason so few lunar mages are born is because of the weakened state of the gene  that allows a person to become a lunar mage to possess the gene you must be a direct descendant of another lunar mage.  
    Strengths:Lunar mages are capable of mixing their animal form's natural killing instruments with their human body.

    During the Full moon when the flow of cosmic energy is at its strongest Spells can cause the most damage.

    Most lunar mages are build to fight with hand to hand combat.
    Weaknesses:
    Lunar mages are deemed monsters by the public and illegal branches of society

    Certain Spells require the user to be outside under the glow of the moon most specifically healing spells and beginner level spells.

    Lunar mages are susceptible to sound, smell, and sight based magic.
    Abilities/Powers: Beast form: Lunar mages are born with both a human and animal form. When the mage reaches the age of 4 ( seriously because you don't have to in school to know  the difference between human and animal.) they begin to change from human form to animal form every night as soon as the moon rises. Most lunar mages  are unable to control this affliction and deem it a curse. For some however it is possible for them to gain control over this power by accepting the beast form as part of themselves and not as a separate entity that they become.


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    Post by Guest 28th December 2012, 7:47 pm

    Is this done? If not, put a WIP in the title.
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    Post by Daemon Spade 12th January 2013, 7:04 am

    Its READY


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 12th January 2013, 7:24 am

    Firstly, put strengths and weaknesses like this:

    Strength 1
    Strength 2
    Strength 3

    Your description of what your magic does it unclear. Please just describe the magic itself and not your history regarding to it. You can say how you use it, but not a history.

    Next, that ability needs clarification. How many posts does it take to heal a minor wound.


    Do that and then i'll look over the spells in more detail. They too need their weaknesses and strengths in a list form


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    Post by Daemon Spade 12th January 2013, 8:41 am

    Fixed I think


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 12th January 2013, 9:35 am

    Please look at other magics and see how they are laid out. Yours is very confusing in that your strengths and stuff are combined into a single sentence. I'll show you my two characters as examples.

    http://fairytailrpg.forumotion.co.uk/t1935-naraku-s-hell-slayer-magic#23323
    http://fairytailrpg.forumotion.co.uk/t1729-satan-soul-take-over

    Also you need to say how long it takes the moonlight to heal a wound. And we don't have a HP system so remove the last weakness.



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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 12th January 2013, 10:07 am

    Daemon Spade wrote:Primary Magic: Lunar
    Secondary Magic: None
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Lunar magic is a dying trait reaching the point where only a few are born every five years and one lucky to live to adulthood , Lunar mages uses the moonlight to defend themselves because of this most Lunar mages rarely leave their homes during the day due to their weakened state. The way lunar magic work is that the caster channels the essence of the moon using them sleves as a medium to imbue their abilities with its power by channeling the Cosmic enegy within the moonlight Fine
    Strengths:Caster is able to able to manipulate cosmic energy to create various different weapons and shields such as spears swords knives and armor. Fine

    During the Full moon when the flow of cosmic energy is at its strongest Spells can cause the most damage.Fine

    Most lunar mages are build to fight with hand to hand combat.Fine
    Weaknesses:
    Lunar mages are unable to cast healing magic. Fine
    Certain Spell that use cosmic energy require the moon to be in the caster line of sight.Fine

    In actual magic attacks Lunar mages do rather poorly .Fine
    Abilities/Powers: Healing through moonlight : A trait known only to users of this dying magic if a lunar mage was injured say from a knife to the stomach and the moon was in the night sky they could pull the knife out and walk into the moon light in order to heal which takes around five to ten mins per injury , the way this works is that lunar mages are able to absorb the cosmic energy that exists in moonlight. Change the time to a number of posts. Say two or three


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    What you need to edit is in teal. I would suggest thinking over your magic. Also....why are you going for such a magic?


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    Post by Daemon Spade 12th January 2013, 10:17 am

    well the reason I want this Magic is due to my love of the stars and the elemental spirit of water


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 12th January 2013, 11:33 am

    Edit how i've said. XD


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    Post by Daemon Spade 12th January 2013, 8:35 pm

    It looks right


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 13th January 2013, 1:05 pm

    Every technique needs a cooldown.

    Your ability needs to be in posts and not minutes. E.g. it takes 3 posts to heal a minor wound.

    Just a cooldown isn't a weakness. You need more weaknesses.


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    Post by Daemon Spade 13th January 2013, 2:57 pm

    Hows this Naraku ?


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 13th January 2013, 3:19 pm

    Healing through moonlight : A trait known only to users of this dying magic if a lunar mage was injured say from a knife to the stomach and the moon was in the night sky they could pull the knife out and walk into the moon light in order to heal which takes around five to ten mins per injury , the way this works is that lunar mages are able to absorb the cosmic energy that exists in moonlight.

    You see the bit highlighted in bold. Change that to a number of posts.
    Also please put EACH weakness and strength on a seperate line.


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    Post by Daemon Spade 13th January 2013, 3:30 pm

    There


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 14th January 2013, 2:35 am

    Generally for a D rank spell the cooldown for an ability is a maximum of 3 posts unless the ability is super strong. Yours are not super strong and so you can get away with a 2 post or 3 post cooldown for your spells.


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    First Skill: Lunar
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    Post by Daemon Spade 14th January 2013, 2:24 pm

    Fixed


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 14th January 2013, 3:41 pm

    Finally approved


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    Post by Aayla 7th December 2014, 7:39 pm

    Unlocked for edits and review


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    Post by Yvonne 29th July 2015, 8:23 am

    Daemon Spade wrote:Primary Magic: Lunar
    Secondary Magic:  None
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Lunar magic was once a very common form of magic so common in fact that a small country was formed by the lunar mages. The lunar mages were a peaceful tribe who lived in harmony with nature  their most prominent allies were the wolves  that lived in the surrounding area even some of the more well known rune knights would have a hard time facing a lunar warrior. TO use lunar magic the user channels energy from the moon and uses their body as a medium then bend the energy into a physical form or as a catalyst for  their hand to hand combat techniques. While in the past lunar magic was common now there is only one user born a year and out of twelve born  only one is lucky to live to adulthood. The main reason so few lunar mages are born is because of the weakened state of the gene  that allows a person to become a lunar mage to possess the gene you must be a direct descendant of another lunar mage.  
    Strengths:Lunar mages are capable of mixing their animal form's natural killing instruments with their human body.

    During the Full moon when the flow of cosmic energy is at its strongest Spells can cause the most damage.

    Most lunar mages are build to fight with hand to hand combat.
    Weaknesses:
    Lunar mages are deemed monsters by the public and illegal branches of society This is not a weakness for this magic

    Certain Spells require the user to be outside under the glow of the moon most specifically healing spells and beginner level spells.

    Lunar mages are susceptible to sound, smell, and sight based magic. You need four weakness.
    Abilities/Powers: Beast form: Lunar mages are born with both a human and animal form. When the mage reaches the age of 4 ( seriously because you don't have to in school to know  the difference between human and animal.) they begin to change from human form to animal form every night as soon as the moon rises. Most lunar mages  are unable to control this affliction and deem it a curse. For some however it is possible for them to gain control over this power by accepting the beast form as part of themselves and not as a separate entity that they become. Describe this ability in detail. What exactly does it do? What kind of boost does it give? Or is this just a transform into wolf sorta ability?


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    ...Basically, I couldn't understand most of what you were trying to do. You missed the 3 strengths 4 weakness rule on most. Most of your strengths are over the top and weaknesses are harsher than what they have to be. You also missed duration and cooldown on all of your spells....try arranging the ideas in a better way..in a way that others can understand and I'll take a look at it again later.


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    Lunar magic  DONE QoRmBvD

      Current date/time is 11th May 2024, 5:13 pm